Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Should I continue writing this story? Critique, please!?

Naww, it's so sad. :( It reminds me of Dreamland by Sarah Dessen and that was heaps depressing. I like how you put in how she can only remember the nice guy she dated, not the mean guy that abused her--sad touch. I really think you should continue because it's awesome.

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